I can't write a normal critique becouse i'm not pro account member, but i can tell sth. about photo. It was cool idea to give face some smoothnes, and connet it with sharp eyes - love it ! Black hairs, dark eyes - the girl is simply cute, but I can't see everything becouse of very dark background (with one stain of light on left side). Meaby hairs are little too sharp imo. Black heart tatoo on that kind of girl actually looks almost natural, and even without a much of makeup (meaby there is a lot, just ... don't look like most of girls from portraits with many fav`s). Well, i can tell for sure, that if you submit some art with nice looking girl people will like it, becouse of a girl. But if she is not like ... half naked/naked ... you see only head and neck ... and people still like it, most probably you are good photographer And this is your case actually [sorry for my poor english, it's my second langauge, or third - i also write and read ancient latin, but since nobody use it now .. i stay with english ]
Thank you for the comment She was laying on the guys lap with black pants so the background ended up being like that. The hair is not actually sharpened. And yeah there isnt much make up just the heart and the eyelashes.
It was cool idea to give face some smoothnes, and connet it with sharp eyes - love it ! Black hairs, dark eyes - the girl is simply cute, but I can't see everything becouse of very dark background (with one stain of light on left side). Meaby hairs are little too sharp imo. Black heart tatoo on that kind of girl actually looks almost natural, and even without a much of makeup (meaby there is a lot, just ... don't look like most of girls from portraits with many fav`s). Well, i can tell for sure, that if you submit some art with nice looking girl people will like it, becouse of a girl. But if she is not like ... half naked/naked ... you see only head and neck ... and people still like it, most probably you are good photographer
And this is your case actually
[sorry for my poor english, it's my second langauge, or third
- i also write and read ancient latin, but since nobody use it now .. i stay with english